You can conclude your essay by reviewing your key points or restating your thesis. Summarizing your thoughts to the whole essay. Make sure to leave out details, just main ideas.
There are seven deadly sins, and they all can be found in Eastview mall. They are represented by stores from all across the mall. Each one has different aspects that make it a seven deadly sin. Seeing the mall change and develop over time is what made me, have the insight to see these seven deadly sins and look at what stores portrayed them.
You can conclude with a prediction.Going off of what was said in the essay to make the reader think and give new perspective. Make the reader think about something that the entire paper doesn't really give them.
Do you think more stores will come and go from Eastview mall? Will more sins come into the mall or do stores there now also portray the sins? With the tough economic times I think the stores will get more competitive and some sins will be portrayed that haven't been portrayed before in others.But as the seven deadly sins still preside in the mall more may come or some may leave.
Hi Kate,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you worked on revising the titles of your posts! They are so much better. I know that you were struggling with creating titles in class the other day. These are pretty good. I'm proud of you. It isn't always easy but you are getting the idea! Well-done my friend. :)
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