Now looking back on this paper I would add images and pictures. I would also add a paragraph on cautions or necessary reminders of making a sandwich to benefit the reader. Looking back we really need to add a conclusion. We need to sum up all that we wrote and add some analysis for the reader to work off of. At the end of the paper "How to Make a PB&J Sandwich, Choose the type of PB&J sandwich you would like to make (normal, double-decker, banana, triple-decker…) Prepare your ingredients, Apply peanut butter to the bottom layer" this is where we left off and I would like to elaborate more on this and work towards the conclusion. Our thesis is clear and to the point so the reader knows what to expect or what they are promised and I think this is a strong introduction and all that it needs a strong conclusion to match it.
My partner discussed revising the paper into a more parallel structure, for example we have eleven sub categories and we would really like to narrow this down to six and incorporate more together and make the paper a little more structure, this would include a deep conclusion. Defining the paper topic and the definition of a sandwich was a strong point in the introduction. Main thing is to add structure and conclusion. Adding more creativity would also bring the paper more life through sensory details. The initial thoughts of the paper and structure go along with our reflection and what we want to revise.
Kate Denhoff and Tyler Gumina
College Composition
How to Make a Sandwich
Panini’s
This sandwich is of Italian origin. It is typically grilled and made on a ciabatta or a rosetta style bread. There are Panini makers to assist with the making of this delicious sandwich. Usually consists of a type of Italian meat (salami, spicy ham) and a cheese.
Subs
Also known has a submarine sandwich, is a sandwich that consists of an oblong roll. Subway, DiBellas, and Quizznos are all submarine sandwich shoppe. Very filling and there are so many different kinds. From Buffalo wing to vegetarian, make your own and chicken bacon ranch.
PB&J
Peanut butter and jelly sandwich is a sandwich, popular in America that includes a layer of peanut butter and either jelly on bread, commonly between two slices. Different jellies can be used including strawberry, concord grape, raspberry or mixed berry. Peanut butter can also be in different styles, creamy, crunchy (peanuts within), and also my personal favorite roasted honey peanut putter. Alternatives for the jelly or peanut butter include fluff or nutella, although contradicting the title of the sandwich.
Diagonal, down the middle, Cross or the Plus
There are many ways of cutting the sandwich. Subs are typical cut vertically into halves or quarters. Panini’s usual cut with a slight diagonal. PB&J cut into four different ways including horizontally, vertically, into squares or triangles, this of course chosen by the consumer.
Grilled Cheese anyone?
A popular grilled sandwich in American culture. And type of bread and cheese can be used. Tomatoes, turkey, and or bacon are popular condiments added to this sandwich. This sandwich is popular among the younger generation. However, remain delicious throughout your lifetime.
White, Wheat, or Rye
Different breads are used during the construction of sandwiches. White also known as Italian is the most popular but not the healthiest on the market. Wheat a popular form of bread with the older generation typically on health kicks or just like the taste! Rye ,
Would You Like That Toasted?
Toasted Bread gives a sandwich a different texture and taste and is loved by many.
Clubs and Triple Decker’s
A club sandwich has three pieces of bread instead of two, there is meat cheese etc then a slice of bread typically toasted and than meat and cheese etc again in between two toasted pieces of bread. This makes for a much bigger sandwich.
How to Make a Panini
- Choose the type of Panini you would like (bread, meats, cheeses, and condiments)
- Prepare your ingredients (cook the bacon, cook the chicken, slice/grate the cheese)
- Slather the bottom of the bread with olive oil (or butter) and place on a grill or stove
- Slather the top of the bread with olive oil (or butter) and apply pressure to the top with a Panini grill or press
- Cook until the bread looks like how you eat your toast.
- Consume or present to the consumer
How to Make a Submarine Sandwich
- Choose the type of Sub you would like to make (bread, meats, cheeses, condiments)
- Prepare your ingredients
- Cut the bread “hot-dog” style and place the ingredients in this order (from bottom to top)
- Lettuce, meats, cheeses, then your condiments
- If you would like to have a toasted sub then add heat now
- Consume or present to the consumer
How to Make a PB&J Sandwich
1) Choose the type of PB&J sandwich you would like to make (normal, double-decker, banana, triple-decker…)
2) Prepare your ingredients
3) Apply peanut butter to the bottom layer
Hi Kate,
ReplyDeleteBe sure to paragraph your reflections. Change paragraphs when you change focus. For this one, you can probably talk about what the assignment was and how you and your partner attacked it all in one paragraph. Then in a new paragraph, talk about what you think about it when you re-read it and what your partner thought about it. And lastly, you can discuss the changes you would make. Does that help?
There is so much text there in those reflections. It will make it easier on the eyes and better reading if you can paragraph your reflections.
Again, check that spelling too :)